Mr.Kimura's Blog (木村のブログ): Mar 22, 2010

Picture Of The Day

Picture Of The Day
Picture Of The Day No10. Suiseiseki ~Desu

March 22, 2010

How to make a s series of paragraphs. Step one you make a T chart of the information on the subject for example we well do samurais and ninjas you well make a chart of what is good about them so for example we well do samurai first

samurai- Well armored skilled sword masters Noble fighters in japan.

Ninja- Assassins uses stealth highly moble.

Now you favour one of your two choices in 3-5 paragraphs you get the ideas from these paragraphs from your ideas in the chart. for this example I shall use samurai.
First you start out with a title stateing what side you take so for this we well use the title
Why Samurais are better then ninjas
then you start with your first idea for samurai it was well armored so we well make the following paragraph

Due to the samurai's armor being well made they can withstand more attacks then a ninja making them more stronger in a battlefield.This may give them advantages as well such as the abilty to take more ranged attacks (arrows) to there body with out dieing.

this paragraph favours the samurai over the ninja because of the armor now we well do the same paragraph but favouring ninja this time

Due to a ninja's light armor they are more moble in combat making them alot more faster in combat and this speed increase could give them the upper hand when fighting a enemy such as a samurai.

you well do this for all your ideas and there you have it a series of paragraphs

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How to make a good news report


For this example we well use a picture of bill gates for our news reports picture most news reports have a picture that the story relates to so here is the picture

now you well start out with a catchy title that well attract the readers eye for example for this picture we well use the title "New Technlogy created!". The next thing you do is start a sentance kind of interduceing what you are talking about or what the report is about a imporatant detail is to never voice your own opanions for exmple never use "I think" or "I thought" or anything around those lines. for the first line of this example we well use this "Bill gates Owner of microsoft has desgined a new product he calls it the floppy disc" this interduces the person in the picture and describes what he is doing in it. The rest of the paragraphs you explain what the thing does and were it was made and when for example "Bill Gates created the floppy disc in 1998 in washington dc" that information is not the correct information but it is what it should look like for it gives a time a place and a person. The last thing is news reports should be about 3-5 paragraphs in langth to give the reader alot of information on the subject
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